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Mar
13th
2016

I Revised the Long Description of The Blue Rose. . . · 12:09am Mar 13th, 2016

. . . do you like it?

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Feb
5th
2022

Short and Long Descriptions · 1:27am Feb 5th, 2022

I have changed the short and long descriptions on the story. A forum poster pointed out reasonably that my descriptions seem to give away everything about the story, and won’t entice new readers because they think they understand what will happen. The new descriptions evoke a sense of mystery

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Apr
19th
2019

Some small fixes in the descriptions of "Letters to Cozy Glow" and how applying them made me get better at something I'm struggling with · 10:00pm Apr 19th, 2019

So, after I checked into "Letters to Cozy Glow" yesterday while writing the next letter/chapter, my eyes fell on the short description and I discovered a small error in it. Small, as in, only one word was wrong. But it made the sentence sound very stupid and gave a wrong idea of what it says.
I went and fixed it, then read through the long description to make sure there isn't a similar error. I found one and it sounded similarly stupid and I fixed that one as well.

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